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She has corrupted my mind like no god has even imagine could be possible of such corruption, she has impacted my very core of my soul in such a way that a comet can’t  even comprehend the striking of the earth like this woman has done to me, she has the beauty that only gods can manifest and yet her hypnotizing wonder is unique,she has roared up a rainbow of feelings in me that will stretch beyond the universe pass the gods eye into eternity, she has made the very god that made her mold kick himself and say what have I done am I in love with my very creation how can this be thinking to himself on his knees looking for the broken pieces of her mold, she is by far the greatest  rare thing on this earth  a woman like this only comes once every  millennium, for you not to like  this woman’s personality or beauty will  be  blasphemy. I will never forget this woman, the times we talked oh the sweet talk, the times we always got interrupted by someone, this was no mistake  encountering this woman, and I say this with no ego, I admire her for what she has done to me, she has changed me in many ways, and she did this just being her sweet self. I made my move I had to for a woman like her to walk this earth and for a man like me to have found her, it was no coincidence but my move was not accepted and yet I don’t regret the feeling words I said  I meant every emotion, she is the most powerful woman I have ever seen in my life and yet she does not know how powerful she is, that itself is true power. We go through life meeting people that will touch you in a way that you simply wont ever forget them, so often come to mind when you are at a difficult  time in your life, people we feel that there was a reason why we met, people just like you, I thank you for being your sweet self.

The very fact that a woman can do this much emotional eruption in a man is beyond the comprehension of the mind and soul, these feelings are godly emotion, we are no longer at the  level of human inspiration, this is ….
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this has been featured here ---> [link]

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This is amazing

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The only thing I would say to this in a critical way is that you might want to go back and proof-read, there are a few misspelled words and some areas where you might want some punctuation.

Other than that, I was really impressed by the imagery and I got pretty caught up in it while reading it. This is an amazing tribute to that woman :)

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thank you for your kind words

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more than welcome :)

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